Lonesome's Lewd Drafts

Well Juro roughly means "tenth son", and Mushi refers to any small crawling creature that isn't a fish or a bird

So his name is basically "Grub Son"

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I'm thinking of how to approach the second chapter about the Tsukishiro twins, and there's a few things I'd like suggestions for:

1. I think I want to abridge their recapture in some way, because there isn't really a way to create an impression their defeat is anything other than guaranteed, unlike Oboro/Momohime being able to overpower Meioki if he didn't have Shizuka's ghost helping him. Is this a good idea?

2. I do want to work in some reaction to Kikuka and Ouka seeing their mother alive again, but I think I need to work with the context that the last time they saw her alive, she was under the thrall of Meioki, and that is still the case now (I've also still got my twist idea in mind, but I want a way to build to it without making it too obvious what Shizuka wants to do. I already did a little foreshadowing in the first chapter with the bit where none of the lewd memories Shizuka fondly recalled involved Meioki)

3. Lastly, I need some ideas for sex stuff I could do that isn't just what happened to the twins in the Shoku OVA. Currently all I've got in mind is one of the twins being raped by juvenille oni, presumably children of Meioki.

It might be cliche', but could take a note from the series itself where Kikuka and Ouka are separated. So the demons use that divided power and increased fear between the two (probably more worried about their sister than themselves) to capture them both, faster. Something like that, splitting them up initially...

I'm pretty fuzzy on the Goku twins backstory DLC. They'd probably be pretty sad seeing their mother or image of her again, but then maybe fired up even more for revenge (especially Kikuka. She seems like a fighter similar to Mikoto to me).

Hard to not suggest and think of combo bodily penetrations and sharing with the twins. All the way through going in and out of various holes between the two, lol, I like that stuff. The series gets pretty wacky with the FUSION ideas... I'm not too big on those though. But maybe some kind of creature connecting their sandwiched belly buttons together could be fun.

There is of course, always the super diabolical Rinko x Kyoko "head" scene in the Shin DLC... but size difference helps that illusion. It's an idea I want to see more of though lol. Mikoto and loli Takeru, or their mother involved, the twins... Rinko x Sui...

I will say though from my own personal sexual fanfic writing, it can be different and fun enough just writing a sexual scene with two girls or more involved. So you maybe don't have to think of anything too creative or original, it might just be fun writing about both the twins being violated and impregnated by tentacles, while they can converse more than a solo captive, etc.

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【EchelonV】in post ID #1755
It might be cliche', but could take a note from the series itself where Kikuka and Ouka are separated. So the demons use that divided power and increased fear between the two (probably more worried ab [...]

My fic provides its own backstory context (going off of the OVA and the Shoku manga, which are vague enough about details for me to fill in the blanks for my own version where all the Tsukishiro women were held captive together, and I combined "Shizuka blessed the girls with immortality" from what I read about what Goku revealed and "Meioki did it with Shizuka's stolen power" into "Shizuka was corrupted by Meioki and used her powers to make the twins immortal so they'd be perfect seedbed slaves, but broke her own body in the process, which Meioki ate now that it was useless for him"

That's actually a very interesting way of combining those two seemingly incompatible plot lines!

Thanks! Although I’ll say I was partially inspired by Taimanim Yukikaze and it’s similar “mother who became a baddie” plot point.

Got a draft of the first part of the next chapter: The Twins Re-Captured: Kikuka and Ouka's Return to Undying Lust
(The titular return is pending, this is the re-capture bit, which still has a little Inyouchuu-ing going on)

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"Stick them back in! I need more, I need mo-Mmmph! Mmrrphg! Hrrrrghmph!"

The plump peasant woman on her hands and knees horny pleas were met by the mantid youma duo cocks skewering her once again, one in her mouth and the other in her now well-worn and semen stuffed asshole. Her large breasts swung freely from the torn remnants of her clothes, and each time the mantid reaming her rectum slammed his long shaft to its base it made her fat butt cheeks jiggle. Her eyes rolled back as the demon aphrodisiacs overwhelmed her, and she squealed like a stuffed pig as she wallowed in indulgence and embraced her role as the youma's fuckpet. 

Unbeknownst to the youma and their latest convert, they were being watched. Two girls, identical save for the red-eyed one having long hair and the blue-eyed one short, observed the ongoing carnal activity from their hiding spot on a bushy hill. Ouka, the long-haired girl, spoke to Kikuka, her short-haired sister.

"Sister, must we delay our attack for so long? I know the youma will be weaker when they have finished with their mating, but I cannot accept that means allowing that woman to suffer"

Kikuka shrugged, having had similar discussions with Ouka over the last few months. "I've told you before, we need to conserve our strength if Meioki finds us again, that means we need to pick the easiest battles. Besides," Kikuka pointed at the woman between the youma, who was enthusiastically deepthroating mantid dick while excess cum dripped out of her mouth and nostrils, "that doesn't look like suffering to me"

Ouka sighed, as she was unable to argue with the evidence in front of her. It wasn't like she didn't understand the woman's position either; it had only been half a year since they'd found the strength of will to escape from the captivity of Meioki. If they hadn't witnessed the oni devour their mother right in front of them, nothing would have shocked them out of the lustful trance they had been under. It was one of the fiend's few weaknesses: compared to the youma that gathered around the oni, he much preferred sadism to sex.

The twins had hoped to bide their time training, and growing their power until they could avenge their mother. Since they were immortal now, they could take all the time in the world. Meioki seemed to know that too, because the girls had been tailed by youma the entire time. Kikuka and Ouka knew that if they used their spirit powers to deal with them, it would give away their location, so kept a low profile and stuck to attacking their enemies at their weakest, so it would appear the youma were perhaps being killed by someone else, like village mobs.

But recently the youma being sent out were getting stronger, too strong to have come from the more "common" kind of woman Meioki had been using for breeding when the twins escaped from him. Clearly the oni had found a higher class of seedbed again, and now the twins were dealing with more situations like now; watching helplessly as youma attacked more innocent communities, eating any men and raping any women they found.

Ouka, for her part, was tired of hiding.

"I'm sorry, sister..." was all Ouka said before leaping out cover. She pulled out a paper tag than began to glow in her hand. "Come forth, Shikigami!" At Ouka's shout, a multi-tailed white dog was summoned, ready to pounce at a moment's notice. Ouka pulled out a second tag, this one producing sparks as it charged up an electrical shock, and she and her summon spirit ran towards the mantids. Neither youma was able to move, partly from shock but also because both of them had just orgasmed (the chubby peasant woman gurgled in approval as gallons of cream were pumped into her guts from both ends.) Thus, they were helpless as the summoner and her beast went in for the kill.

Or they would have been, if Ouka and her shikigami did not crash into a barrier of spirit energy. The barrier overcharged Ouka's lightning tag, which detonated in the girl's hand. "AAAAAAGHH!" All at once, pain hit every nerve in the girl's body, and she fell over unconscious as her body spasmed. Meanwhile, the shikigami crashed to the ground after bouncing off the barrier and then faded from existence, since the collision destroyed the paper containing the summon sigil on it. 

"Nee-Sama!" Screamed Kikuka, who had been unable to respond to her sister's impulsive action before it all went to hell. She prepared to make her own move when she felt someone grab her from behind and put a katana to her throat. Kikuka was helpless as the unseen figure stripped her naked and bound her wrists with rope. When the assailant was done, Kikuka was allowed to turn around and see her captor, still pointing the blade at her face: A girl wearing nothing but a metal collar with "妖魔妻" ("Youma Wife") engraved on it, and whose distended belly, bloated breasts, and the streams of cum leaking from her ass, pussy, and even her nipples indicated she'd recently finished a round of her spousal obligations.

Kikuka was slightly grateful that Ouka was not awake to see this, or else her sister might never let her live down a defeat this humiliating.

"Greeting Kikuka," said the nude sword-wielding youma slut, "I'm Momohime, and I'm so glad your mother let me help bring you back!"

The short-haired twin's blue eyes were wide with shock at that statement. "My...mother? That's impossible, Meioki ate her piece by piece, he even licked up the blood pool-" 

Kikuka was interrupted by Momohime pointing behind her, back at where Ouka fell. Except now, plain as day, was Shizuka in the flesh, bridal carrying Ouka's unconscious form while she sank into a dark portal on the ground.

The mantids also sank into a portal, carrying their own female prize, whose dumb smile and thumbs-up plainly stated "I know what's coming next, and I am One Hundred Percent on board"

Momohime flashed her own more ominous grin at Kikuka as the two sank in the last portal, a look of horror plain on the other girl's face as the reality that she was returning to the hell of Meioki's den sank in. 

"Don't worry Kikuka, you and your sister are gonna have so much fun helping master and mistress with their plan..."

Very good, I like it.

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